Responding to Feedback

Over the past week Ruma Whā have learned how to write and post

positive, thoughtful and helpful comments on individual learning blogs.

This week they are going to use these comments to make changes and
improve the writing ‘The Perfect Day’ posted earlier.

The Perfect Day class brainstorm.

Today we went to 'answer garden' to complete a class brainstorm and identify 'The Prefect Day' for us. It was fun using 'answer garden' We have attached this brainstorm to our class blog.

Welcome back Ruma Whā

Welcome back Ruma Whā and kia ora to all our visitors. What a busy and exciting term we have ahead of us. Here are some of the adventures we will be getting up to. Pet day, Shantytown trip, Brunner mine trip, Life Education, overnight camp and athletics evening. We have begun our term writing about 'The Perfect Day'. Please read our blogs. We would love to read all your comments.